As a freebie, this shows more promise that a lot of Kindle Selects. Some maturity of prose could be used, But overall the ideas are well fitting to a mystical or occult game. Giving players and ST's equally a spring board for creating and estimating the worth for occult books with a direct Vampiric function. For those that worry is it balanced, it can be, but to give a single PC access to this as just as unbalanced as most secondary books.
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